Thesis Type (4.2)

So before really getting deep into the paper or anything we should have some kind of idea of our thesis or at least the point we'd like to make now that our research is all finished. For different types of subjects there are different ways to shape a thesis. In order to get the right idea you have to think to yourself what your viewpoint is on your subject RIGHT NOW at this moment. Not yesterday, not what you might be thinking tomorrow, what you think RIGHT NOW as your rough draft is in the works and all the research is finished. What I think about my subject is that Deaf children's discrimination in a public school and lack of understanding and successful test scores has to do with the school and teacher's ability to reach out to these children as they reach out the every other child. The only difference from these kids from the other is their ability to hear, other than that there shouldn't be a different between the attention they needed to learn and be educated opposed to an everyday hearing child. This is considered a "Question of Policy" type of situation which requires this type of thesis. Which is kind of like: In the debate over____, I'm persuaded that the most important thing to do is____. Well here is my thesis so far in my rough draft "Common sense seems to dictate that being Deaf is to have a disability but majority of Deaf people believe that it is simply like having their own culture." So as you can see it is a little bit off from what I initially said. So lets change it up a bit. "Common sense seems to dictate that being Deaf is to have a disability, but I've come to the conclusion that it is instead a culture, just as Deaf people see, and that their education and social development shouldn't be affected in school because of their Deafness." There, good as new!